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My first attempt to draw a portrait... for making it easier, her hair is on the right side of her face.. ;)

Done with 3B pencil on Copy-paper

EDIT Dec08:
Wow, my first Picture with more than 1k Views... Thank you all for looking... :)

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:icongeronimo89:
Sieht wirklich sehr toll aus. Die Leichtigkeit der Haare die durch die minimalistische Ausführung entsteht wirkt sehr gut.
Auge, Nase und Mund sind sehr plastisch, bildet aber keinen zu starken Kontrast zum Gesamtbild. Insgesamt ein sehr sehr schönes Bild.

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Auch hier, vielen Dank fürs kommentieren und die kritik! :)

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Thank you very much.. :)

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:iconevilnoodles:
Very nice!
Love the shading, and the eye!
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Thank you so much.. :)

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:iconmemod:
This caught my eye in someone's favourites, I actually like that the hair is left out, because it works like a graphical element, giving the piece a very stylized look. Now it might be interesting to see it on a darker background, but maybe then the hair would look white, rather than left out.
The simplicity of the face works, too, although mouth and chin are a bit crooked, and I think that the back of the nose seems too hard, but I realise that this piece is over a year old, so yeah, I'm not too worried :D the one thing that probably does not fall into place of the overall lightning is the tip of the nose and the wings. the left wing would probably catch some light, too, and not be as dark, while the bottom of the nose tip would catch some shadow.
Anyhow, despite these few critiques, I think this looks pretty cool :nod: Nice work! :D

Daniel

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Vielen lieben Dank für die ausführliche Kritik... :)

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Gern geschehen :aww:

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"Tomorrow will begin the first day of the rest of your life" // Thomas Koschwitz

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January 21, 2008
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